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Houston’s best dressed managed to remain cool and stylish at Free Press Summer Fest despite the 90 degree temps. Fashionable festival goers chose to forego the regular baseball cap and donned stylish fedoras and floppy sun hats. Sunglasses were an essential item not just to shade your eyes from the sun but they’re also handy for people watching. Surprisingly, fanny packs made a big comeback as the most convenient bag to use at a music festival. Some big trends to look out for at festivals: a mix, mash of prints, anything and everything neon, and easy breezy open knit or lace blouses. Check out some of the best dressed at Summer Fest…

Is too editorial and not personal enough (for a certain voice I want need to aim for), but I like it.